You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date explain your accommodation needs ask for information about getting to and from the college

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Hi Madam, My name is Sunny. I am going to start my Hospitality course coming January. I haven't been to Montreal before. I will reach via a flight on 01/01/2023. I just wanted to know some basic information that I need to know to settle down quickly without any problems.

Firstly

, the room I rent will have all the necessary things there,

such

as a good internet connection is very important as I have to do course-related work and there should be a less noisy place as I can't sleep with nosy neighbours.

Secondly

, I want to know about some community services. Like it can take approximately 40 minutes to reach my destination by bus. Is there a faster way by which I can come to college? If there are many ways, which one will be cheaper and best? Please let me know if there is any information

that is

required from my side. Your Sincerely, Sunny

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