Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed, that the environment can only be improved by governments and large companies, while
individuals
find it impossible to contribute. In
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I will argue about the power each and every world citizen holds when it comes to
the
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environment
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protection, since, in my opinion, even the smallest creature can make a difference, the only problem is what must be sacrificed on
this
path. On the one hand, it is always easier for an individual to put a blame on the ones “above”,
for instance
,
government
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or company, rather than face the responsibility and
finally
take some
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in the ongoing war against air/water/soil pollutions, even if it means to sacrifice most of
conveniences
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, that humans have always enjoyed and strived for. As the saying goes, if you want to change the world, start from yourself,
therefore
, it is necessary for
individuals
to start with little steps,
such
as
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recycling or usage of fabric shopping bags
instead
of plastic ones, to decrease
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impact on our planet. We may never know what is around the corner, but what we do know is that there will be no outcome, neither good nor bad
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if no action is taken.
On the other hand
, the impact of a government/
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ecology protection actions and an ordinary citizen are non-comparable, as it is quite evident official facilities have more power and influence abilities. While governments are in charge of taking serious legal measures to solve local
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issues, large companies, on the basis of resources they hold, shall serve as a polar star and navigate people on the way to free-from-suffering earth, by means of financial and influential support. In conclusion, while
individuals
can definitely make their own contribution, the higher effectiveness of governments and companies’ actions is undoubtful.
However
, passionate
individuals
supported by legal entities can make our world a better place even more efficiently.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • waste reduction
  • conservation
  • ecosystem
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • responsibility
  • leadership
  • legislation
  • investment
  • collaboration
  • systemic change
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