Due to rise in crime, the use kf cctv cameras at publicplaces is increasingly day by day .what are the advantages and disadvantages of using cctv cameras at public places?

nowadays,
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also
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of
ccttv
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CCTV
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camera
are getting popular in
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public
place
constant increase day by day.the trend
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is pro and corn but in my opinion
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outweigh
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the disadvantage
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disadvantage
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of utilises cameras.
firstly
,
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would like to highlight of benefits of using
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CCTV
in
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public
place
. if any
crime
happen
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on the road or
place
so it will be easy for
police
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a police
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officer to take help from the
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CCTV
cameras.while
happen
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street
crime
such
as mobile so police can get the
cctv
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CCTV
footage
so they can catch them
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easily
easlily
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easily
and note
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number of their vehicles.
for instance
, a month ago
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in front
infront
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in front
of my home . some
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people
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the people
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snatch the mobile and some cash from our
neighbors
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so
it
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they
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come
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into
camera
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the camera
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and we provide that
footage
to the police and they catch them through that
video
cause
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their
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are
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showing in that
video
.
moreover
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the camera
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camera
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on
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the
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public
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. many people using on their shops for the safety purpose. because many of
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owner
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aren't
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their shops so they can see the
footage
through the technology. to illustrate, my uncle
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outlet
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an outlet
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which many branches so they put the
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CCTV
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everywhere
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every where
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everywhere
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so he can see the
footage
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different
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.
however
,there are
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of advantages doesn't mean that there are no drawbacks.few
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also
there
such
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of
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get
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leaked on
internet
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. many
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couple
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making
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love in
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public
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so that got leaked on social media.
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the
girl
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got
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facebook
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. she get so shame and in the
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she commit
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suicide
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suicide
. to sum up,
crime
is
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raised
rising
rised
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rising
all around the world due
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crime
most the
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camera
in the public
place
. advantages more than
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disadvantage
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of put cameras.
i
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have
outline
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some benefits of
such
easily
to catch
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catching
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criminals
crimals
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criminals
and people
metor
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met
mentor
their franchise easy .
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