As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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mindset and build up their own enterprises. It is clear to me that the more money the business makes the more responsibilities to Correct your spelling
entrepreneurship
the
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it should take.
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, there is no denying that businesses play a very important role in creating jobs for man. Linking Words
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people
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previous period of time.
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