Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Television

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of the pivotal inventions made by mankind. Many human beings say that

television

is helpful for teaching, while others believe it is used merely for amusement. I think

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information.

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my approach with examples in the forthcoming passages.

First

off, it is an explicit fact that T.V. is a member of the most popular ways of enjoyment.

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, there are miscellaneous shows and channels available to

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one

's free time with options and these consist of movies, series, sports and so on.

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, it helps an individual to blow off steam and

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relieve stresses

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from daily problems and

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environment. To give an example,

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a study conducted by the University of New York depicts that nearly 85% of Americans have at least

one

TV

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in their home and they use it or

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to

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Hence

, T.V. is

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of the most important things in

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modern life.

Secondly

, TV has an important role in education life as well as learning-based

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.

In addition

, students and teenagers learn

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things pertaining to their lectures and area that are interested in. To exemplify, I am

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for

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serious progress in my English speaking skill by watching many things on TV.

Thus

,

television

can be handy for juveniles in their

educations

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. To conclude, they can be used for education and learning,

although

they can be used to enjoy.

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, I opine that

television

has a significant part of our lives ,

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its use should be regulated by parents when children are learning something through it.