Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Television
was one
of the pivotal inventions made by mankind. Many human beings say that television
is helpful for teaching, while others believe it is used merely for amusement. I think this
device is
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First
off, it is an explicit fact that T.V. is a member of the most popular ways of enjoyment. In other words
, there are miscellaneous shows and channels available to spent
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spend
one
's free time with options and these consist of movies, series, sports and so on. Moreover
, it helps an individual to blow off steam and to
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work
environment. To give an example, Correct article usage
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according to
a study conducted by the University of New York depicts that nearly 85% of Americans have at least Change preposition
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one
TV sets
in their home and they use it or Fix the agreement mistake
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its
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enjoy
. Correct pronoun usage
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Hence
, T.V. is one
of the most important things in the
modern life.
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Secondly
, TV has an important role in education life as well as learning-based contents
. Fix the agreement mistake
content
In addition
, students and teenagers learn a great deal of
things pertaining to their lectures and area that are interested in. To exemplify, I am Change the quantifier
a lot of
many
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examples
this
issue, I made a
serious progress in my English speaking skill by watching many things on TV. Remove the article
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Thus
, television
can be handy for juveniles in their educations
.
To conclude, they can be used for education and learning, Fix the agreement mistake
education
although
they can be used to enjoy. Therefore
, I opine that television
has a significant part of our lives ,nonetheless
its use should be regulated by parents when children are learning something through it.Add a comma
,nonetheless
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