You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

Dear Sampath
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I hope you are doing great and thank you for writing a letter to me. I received your letter and I am very happy with you that shared with me what you have a problem. I suggest that in your current situation. I can understand that you are in family trouble. I heard very bad news from your side, your father has died. I am so sorry for that bad news. I think now you are the man who handles your family. I strongly believe that you can do that responsible
job
for your family. You need to care for your mother &
brother
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and brother
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. I think now is the time your turning point in your life. Think it’s time to find a new
job
for you. It will help to care for your mother’s health & your brother's studies &
your
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future. Please you should apply for a
job
. I recommend you go accounting
job
. Which has a Banking field. You can find the accounting
job
on seek.com web site. Make a good CV and a cover page to apply for all banking accounting jobs. I strongly believe you can find a Good
job
. All the best & will meet you soon. Your Best friend Karawita
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Real-world experience
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • On-the-job training
  • Student loan debt
  • Personal growth
  • Professional networking
  • Career development
  • Skilled workers
  • Job market
  • Career goals
  • Immediate income
  • Professional relationships
  • Market demand
  • Defining interests
  • Educational investments
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