You recently stayed in a hotel in another city. When you got home you discovered that you had left something of value in the room. Write a letter to the hotel. In your letter • describe the item that you left behind and say where you left it • ask the hotel to arrange to send it to you • suggest a way to pay for the postage
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to an item that I forgot in the room during my stay at your hotel in Mumbai.
I stayed from 05
/
10/
2022 to 7/
10/
2022 in room number 401. On this
occasion, while checking out of the hotel, I forgot my Fossil watch in the room's safe. Its
a digital watch with an all-black customized leather strap which has my name written on it. I could Replace the word
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only when I reached my hometown, Gurgaon, and my wife pointed out the missing watch.
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device is even more important to me because it is an anniversary gift given to me by my spouse. I would request to to
kindly arrange to send it to me via courier service because it will not be possible for me to come and collect it in person. My address is attached Remove the redundancy
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Once you prepare to dispatch the courier, please let me know about the postage charges. Also
, kindly share with me your bank account details so that I can transfer the expense amount in
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charge that amount from the credit card as you already have my card's detail in your record.
I am hoping for a positive response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Aman MalikSubmitted by amanmalik640 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite