In some countries the elderly are highly valued and respected, while in others youth is more highly valued. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In some
countries
,
elder
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generation
is more essential
however
, there are some cultures where
young
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generation
is more crucial.
This
essay will discuss both
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with some examples. On the one hand, old
people
are valued more, especially in Arabic
countries
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is
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might be because old citizens have more experience.
Also
from their childhood parents taught them to
respect
people
who are older.
In addition
, it depends on
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the country
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country
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country's
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culture and history.
For example
,
countries
on the east side of
world
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like Japan, South Korea, China and others. They have
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respectful
respectfully
respectfull
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attitude to
older
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the older
an older
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generation
.
On the other hand
, young citizens are valued more in some
number of
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countries
.
People
respect
young
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the young
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generation
due to their progressive future. To illustrate, the future of the world is in their hands. Government try to spend their budget on
students
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students'
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education to have more high-qualified
people
.
For instance
, cultures
who
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have
high
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a high
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quality of life like Canada,
USA
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the USA
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,
European
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and European
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countries
,
they
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pay attention
on
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developing education because young
people
should be professional in their area.
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Regarding
to the statistic which
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the Canada
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Canada
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government Illustrated their community consider
young
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the young
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generation
more
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important
importand
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important
an
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and
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valued rather than
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elderly
ederly
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elderly
people
.
Hence
, developed
countries
respect
young are and
countries
with great history
respect
more
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old individuals. Taking everything into consideration, it
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depends
depens
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depends
on
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the country
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country
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country's
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culture.
From
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my personal opinion, young citizens are more valued and significant
for
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in
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world
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the world
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.
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