In some countries the elderly are highly valued and respected, while in others youth is more highly valued. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
In some
countries
, elder
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the elder
generation
is more essential however
, there are some cultures where young
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the young
generation
is more crucial. This
essay will discuss both statement
with some examples.
On the one hand, old Change to a plural noun
statements
people
are valued more, especially in Arabic countries
this
is
might be because old citizens have more experience. Unnecessary verb
apply
Also
from their childhood parents taught them to respect
people
who are older. In addition
, it depends on Correct article usage
the country
country
culture and history. Change noun form
country's
For example
, countries
on the east side of world
like Japan, South Korea, China and others. They have Add an article
the world
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respectful
respectfully
respectfull
attitude to Correct article usage
a respectfull
older
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the older
an older
generation
.
On the other hand
, young citizens are valued more in some number of
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apply
countries
. People
respect
young
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the young
generation
due to their progressive future. To illustrate, the future of the world is in their hands. Government try to spend their budget on students
education to have more high-qualified Change noun form
students'
student's
people
. For instance
, cultures who
have Correct pronoun usage
that
high
quality of life like Canada, Add an article
a high
the high
USA
, Correct article usage
the USA
European
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and European
countries
, they
pay attention Correct pronoun usage
apply
on
developing education because young Change preposition
to
people
should be professional in their area. Regarging
to the statistic which Correct your spelling
Regarding
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the Canada
Canada
government Illustrated their community consider Replace the word
Canadian
young
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the young
generation
more Correct your spelling
important
importand
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important
an
valued rather than Correct your spelling
and
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elderly
ederly
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elderly
people
. Hence
, developed countries
respect
young are and countries
with great history respect
more
old individuals.
Taking everything into consideration, it Correct quantifier usage
apply
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depends
depens
on Correct your spelling
depends
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the country
country
culture. Change noun form
country's
From
my personal opinion, young citizens are more valued and significant Change the preposition
In
for
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in
world
.Add an article
the world
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