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DOCTORS, NURSED AND TEACHERS MAKE A GREAT CONTRIBUTION TO SOCIETY AND SHOULD BE PAYED MORE THAN ENTERTAINMENT AND SPORTS CELEBRITIES. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

#doctors #teachers #contribution #society #entertainment #sports #celebrities
The debate that which vocation makes a greater contribution to
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society
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 enough. Many people believe that Doctors, Nurses and Teachers have a larger contribution to
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society
, and
hence
 they should be compensated more than the
celebrities
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entertainment
 industry. I wholeheartedly disagree. In
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 our
society
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 and the factors that should be considered
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 deciding the pay of any profession.
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 the fact that the work of a Doctor,
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Nurses
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 and a Teacher is the greatest service to
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mankind,
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celebrities
 from various industries like
entertainment
 and
sports
 can
also
 have a transformational impact on people's lives. Both these industries,
for instance
, have brought positive change on issues like gender equality and domestic violence.
Moreover
, they are
also
 responsible for spreading awareness
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 physical fitness amongst today's youth which is the future of our
society
. Clearly, one should not underestimate the change brought by
entertainment
 and
sports
celebrities
. When it comes to remuneration of any profession, one should
also
 consider
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factor like the input cost or the expenses required to operate that business. Indeed,
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sports
celebrities
 are paid really well, but one should not neglect their journey when they have worked hard their whole life and invested heavily in their preparation to reach that level where they can bring glory to their country.
Similarly
, the cost of any good project in
entertainment
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 world can easily go in crores of rupees and
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celebrities
 have to spend
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amount
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 on themselves to maintain that celebrity status. Since the cost is high, it will be reasonable to compensate these
professions
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accordingly
.
This
 essay discussed the contributions of
entertainment
 and
sports
celebrities
 to our
society
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 their pay being more than any other profession. While many want the pay of Doctors, Nurses and Teachers to be more than
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celebrities
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, I believe that all these professions are already being paid as per their contribution to mankind and their expenses to work.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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