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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What the are the advantages and disaadvantages of solar energy? Give reasons for your answer and include any relavant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Solary
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Solar
Salary
energy
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 has
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become
bemcome
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become
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source
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sources
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 of household
energy
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 in many
countries
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 in the world as it is economical friendly in long term and
sustainable
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a sustainable
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source
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 of
energy
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 in long run. Unlike any other
source
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 of
energy
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 systems to generate
power
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 in
household
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households
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 solar is very popular as
Sun
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 is a
source
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 which is
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available
avialble
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available
accessible
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and accessible
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 in most parts of the world Solar
energy
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 has numerous advantages, To
beging
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begin
 with
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sun
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the sun
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 is a
source
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 of
energy
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 which is
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available
availble
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available
on
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for
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 365 days and is a
source
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 which is
reliable
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 than any other
source
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 like
rain water
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rainwater
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, wind
power
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 or coal,etc. It can be stored on
the
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apply
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sunny days and can be taken at a later date or at night to
use
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.
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 on the economical
factor
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 it is a
long term
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 investment as only a
one time
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 cost and no other cost of electricity bills
thereafter
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. It can save more time and money and you can have electricity
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through
throughout
throught
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throughout
 the year uninterruptedly as it has no dependency
over
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 any other factors other than
Sun
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. On a note of
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contrary
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contrary
contray
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 there are
few
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a few
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disadvantages
disadvatages
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disadvantages
 of Solar
power
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 as well.
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 not all
countries
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 have
Sun
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through
throughout
thought
throught
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throughout
 the day and
on
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in
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 all four seasons. It might be
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successful
successfull
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successful
on
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in
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 tropical
countries
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 which are closer to the
grinich
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grinch
 line. But for
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those
these
thoese
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those
countries
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 which have four seasons they might not have the access to
Sun
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through
throughout
thought
throught
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throughout
 the year. On
the
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a
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 cost basis, solar
energy
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 installation is expensive and requires a large investment at once. Sometimes that much of
large
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a large
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 income is not accessible to all
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households
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house holds
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households
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.
On
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a
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apply
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conclusion I feel Solar
energy
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 despite being a little bit expensive
it
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apply
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is a great
source
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 of
energy
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 to be used
at
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by
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household
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households
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 which is
advantages
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advantageous
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 for both households as well as
environment
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the environment
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 in long term and it does not take any
scare
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scarce
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resources
resourses
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resources
 to
use
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 to produce
power
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in to
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into
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energy
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. The governments of the
countries
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also
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 should add
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use
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the use
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 of solar
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energy
enery
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energy
 at
large
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a large
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 scale and more
economical
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economically
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accessible
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access
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 to people. It is vital that human being starts being more
eco friendly
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eco-friendly
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 as we have already run out of renewable
energy
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 sources in excess
use
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 for human
use
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