Young people committing crimes should be treated the same as adults by authorities. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is considered by some individuals that young

offenders

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should get the same treatment as older criminals from the government. In my opinion, I disagree with

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because most adolescents indulge in criminal activities due to immaturity and if given a

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chance, they can make positive contributions to

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society

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with the larger number of

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they have ahead. One reason why the government should be lenient with juvenile

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is due to the immaturity of young people.

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, many young people have raging emotions because of puberty and other biological changes in their

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at

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stage of

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. The reaction to these rapid changes could lead them to commit crimes because they have not mastered their emotions.

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, the sexual changes at puberty can make a young boy touch somebody of the opposite sex inappropriately thereby becoming

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sexual offenders

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offenders

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. Another reason why minors should get lesser judgement when they commit offences is that they can still be productive in their later

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I mean when people commit crimes at a young age, giving them a similar sentence to an adult will rob

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of other positive things they could contribute to

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society

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in their later

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.

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, a person who gets imprisoned at around

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eighteen

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of eighteen

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for a term of fifty

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will not contribute any tax or other valuable things to

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society

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. In conclusion, I think young

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should not be subjected to the same punishment as older criminals because of their undeveloped minds and the loss of valuable contributions to the community.