learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. if these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out

Learning a foreign
language
such
as
English
at school
often
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seen as important more than studying local
languages
. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In my opinion,
English
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language
has become a global
language
,
therefore
study
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English
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language
is more important rather than learning local
languages
, but we have to give some priority
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local
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language
also
in some manner. Giving an opportunity to learn
English
to our pupils at the school get advantages
than
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teaching the local
language
. As an example, with
English
Education
, students get knowledge about foreign
languages
and cultures, and
also
it is helping to enhance and share their knowledge with international students. I believe that
this
is the best way to bring innovative ideas and technology to the
country
. Students who live in the countryside, don’t get a chance to touch the new globalized world without
English
knowledge.
In addition
, giving the opportunity to learn
English
to all children who live in every corner of the
country
is a responsibility of the government and the ministry of
education
.
Furthermore
, we can discuss a lot of advantages that we can have, because of
English
. Winning the international economy is the best advantage of
English
education
, who has a good ability to use the
English
language
, an easy to find a job in the international market, and bring foreign exchange to the
country
, and I thoroughly believe that we cannot take our culture things and
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to international without
English
.
moreover
, there will be no more tourist industry in the
country
without
English
and communication skills in
English
. Some people argue that learning a foreign
language
is a threat to the local
languages
, and its effect on the
country
’s culture and historical heritage, because when people go away from their native
language
,
then
they ignore their cultural
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and become demolish local society,
therefore
we have to teach the
English
language
with under the guidance of experts, and with the help of government bodies.
On the other hand
, others think that People do not hesitate to emigrate to other countries, because of
English
education
,
secondly
, they settle in a foreign
country
with their family,
therefore
, the local
country
does not benefit from the result of
English
education
.
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  • global communication
  • economic opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • endangered
  • linguistic heritage
  • inclusive
  • multilingualism
  • language revitalization
  • language policy
  • language preservation
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