Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading as to buy things. Other people say advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

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incomes and brand
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there are many local, except online, which have advertisements on the street banners or posters which are omi-present.
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it is not enough to
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local enterprises need reliable and
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status among the falk, where it
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ads can be unnoticed , promotion is considerable for
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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