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The culture of different places are now looking similar in modern times. What do you think are the causes of this? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

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In modern society, we see cultural differences disappearing in many parts of the world and the
culture
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 of different places are now looking similar in modern times.
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 essay shed light on the positive trend and causes of some reasons which are responsible for
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 with, by increasing technology and social media influence among the population all over the world. People watch different
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 on posts on Instagram or Facebook and get knowledge about the different
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, Halloween
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 as we see
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 in every part of the region is becoming more famous.
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 is hosting Halloween parties and individuals are getting scary and supernatural dressed.
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, the
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 of diverse places is becoming the same in today's time by doing
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 trend the population know about a different
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 and get more information about a different
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. By doing
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everyone
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 will feel easily connected to each other and by which everybody will respect each other
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.
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, Dandiya is a Gujarati
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 which is becoming famous in every country.
Everyone
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 will wear Gujarati traditional clothes and play Garba with their family members and with loved ones. In conclusion, I think
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 is beneficial for all of us because
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 trend brings brotherhoods in different countries people and countries
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. As we all know that many students and individuals left their nations for studies and jobs
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so they
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 can
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 enjoy their own
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 even in different territory.
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