You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this. • Describe your purchase order of this book • Explain the importance of the book • Say what you want the company to do for you

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to regard the exam preparation that I purchased online a couple of weeks ago, I still haven't received any of the documents yet. I ordered a novel online, the name of the

book

is ' life without limited', and the writer is Nicholas Vujicic.I placed my order on the 15th of August 2022.The order number of

this

book

is AYU129495. It cost me about $49, and

also

I paid for express delivery for additional $20 shipping. It's very disappointing that

this

happened.

This

book

is really important to me,it is a gift for my friend's birthday. She has been looking for

this

book

for a long time. I am requested to resend the books by express shipping and get a full refund. I am looking forward to hearing back from you as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Yumi

Submitted by yumiwong1212123 on Mon Oct 10 2022

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

143 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Many organizations and companies ask their staff to wear a uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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