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The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

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The conversation about overpopulation can quickly become a controversial topic these days. Today the Earth is home to more than 7.8 Billion people. Overcrowdedness becomes a major problem for many
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. I Agree with the proposed thought and the reasons for my inclination glance through the following paragraph with causes. To commence with, the primary reason for
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 growth is the falling mortality rate.
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 The infant mortality rate had decreased due to which the ratio of birth to death changed rapidly.
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 to that, lack of education in youngsters plays an important role
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. In people like India, marriage take place in the early days of childhood due to which the
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 of the country increasing.
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, immigration from Developing
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 to Developed ones in search of better livelihood can be one of the reasons for the overcrowdedness
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, Some
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 want to Grow their economy by increasing their
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. That's why they have not established rules for overpopulation. Manpower is very cheap in these
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 so using
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, mass production of products can be done. Some of the other causes responsible for an increase in
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 are the joint family systems other than a western culture where nuclear families exist in Asia many families are joint families. In Conclusion, I agree
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 is the greatest problem in front of the whole world and we have to mitigate
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the percentage of
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 growth ecological degradation occurs and most of the land of the earth is occupied by humans.
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