You work for an international company. You enjoy this work but now you want to leave the company. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter - Tell the manager why you want to leave the company - Explain what you have learnt from working at the company - Say why you have enjoyed working for the company

Dear Allan, I am writing a letter to notice of my resignation from my position as a Sous Chef. The

last

day of my employment will be 30th October 2022. The reason I resigned is that I am moving back to my country. Due to my mother being sick, I have the responsibility to take care of her. Thank you for being patient and giving me an opportunity to learn from others. I have learned so many skills in the

last

couple of years,

such

as being a good team member with others and having my own ideas to create new dishes. I so enjoyed working here because everyone is so friendly and helpful. Sometimes I feel like we are not just about working but

also

a part of the family members. I wish you and your team all the best and I look forward to staying in touch with you. Yours sincerely, Yumi

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

154 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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