Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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the opinion that home is a better place for children's growth while some believe that educational institutes would play a significant role in

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places have their own importance for the

child

's

development

. There are many benefits for the children being taught in homes.

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a school of thought that mothers are the

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learning school for every

child

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their

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early age. Basic manners,

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to talk and speak is taught

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mothers.

Likewise

, parents know the skills and the weaknesses of their

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to guide them and

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train them to cope

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their weak zones. They find the best skills and the interest their

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children

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have.

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recent research in California,

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who get enrolled in

schools

after 7 years are more focused

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the kid’s gets

admissions

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in

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early 4 years of age.

Furthermore

, parents develop a good relationship with their

child

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.

Secondly

,

schools

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play a significant role in the

development

of the

child

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discipline and responsibility can only be taught when a

child

is out of their

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comfort zones

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comfort-zones

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.

Schools

helps

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to develop various skills like public speaking and

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to build confidence make them socially active and trained them to handle every situation. According to

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recent reach carried

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a great U.S physiologist, he concluded that

schools

are more responsible for the

development

and growth of children because of the environment and decorum of the school as compared to the schooling at

homes

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. In my opinion, both homes and

schools

are necessary for the children’s

development

based on the

child

's age. Both

schools

and

home schooling

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have benefits

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the

wellbeing

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well-being

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of the

child

.