A friend of yours moved to a new home recently and you would like to send him/her a present for the home. Write a letter your friend. In the letter, • Describe the present • Tell him/her why you chose this present • Explain how you would like to deliver the present.

#friend #home

Hi George, Hope you are doing well and your family is too. I am very happy to know that you have recently purchased a home. Congratulations on your home. Since I have been continuously attending my final semester classes, I could not able to attend your housewarming ceremony, I am planning to send a present behalf of me.

First

of all,I am very sorry for my absence on

this

occasion. Even though I may not be coming to the party, I am sending a memorable gift to you.

Last

week,I have visited an art museum in Ottawa, I have seen many beautiful wall arts and among ,them one of the nature wall decorative paintings touched b my heart, When I was looking into the art, I got you in my mind and Immediately I purchased that for you.

Finally

, I would like you to receive my present a day before your occasion that I had couriered it through UPS service and you are going to receive it on that day. And

also

, I am mentioning the tracking number to know the status of the package. Let me know, once you receive the mail from UPS, I will be waiting for your response. Your loving friend, Tulasi

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

206 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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