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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about history of the houses or building they live in. what are the reasons for this?? how can people research this??

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Nowadays, it is commonly seen that citizens are quite excited to get to know about their ancestor, their lifestyle and
their
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 did. In many parts of the
,
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world
people
 are getting more curious to know about the
history
 of
the
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houses or old creatures. The main reason behind
this
 is the
internet
, with the advancement of technology and the
internet
 individual can easily search for the past and the story behind it.
This
 essay will discuss all the possible reasons and ways of research behind it in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
 with, In the contemporary world, individuals are more aware and alert about their existence and the story behind the places where they reside.
People
 have studied historical subjects and apart from that, movies in the cinemas
also
 show the
history
 of the county, local area and the community.
For instance
, many Bollywood movies have seen palaces and forts of India about which
people
 were totally unaware of it. Moving ahead, access
of
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 the
internet
 has increased and has reached to end
people
 which has made their daunting task easily available regarding information about old buildings and ancient houses.
Moreover
, libraries and ancient materials
such
 as novels,
history
 books and schools are
also
 available in the distal areas of the country where even
internet
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also
 has not reached.
People
 over there can get to know about their
history
 by reading books and other magazines.
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,
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a recent survey found that 26% of citizens are getting information about ancestor places from the
internet
 and books. To recapitulate, though, there are many places and buildings still standing out there keeping their own stories but with the availability of enough ,resources mankind is able to reach its roots.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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