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A growing population is a big problem in many countries. Should the government provide new homes in the cities or countryside?

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There is a number of
countries
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 where the population is considered the major problem whereas many developed
nations
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 have already solved
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 issue. I believe that new buildings might be a way to deal with
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 problem but several other measures can be taken to alleviate
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 trouble. To commence with, it can be seen in many developed
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 that they are handling
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 issue without making new houses.
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, they are educating the residents about what consequences can be in the community if they do not plan for kids.
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, no more than two kids are the trend in China and they are rewarding the public if they have less than two children.
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, in the
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 few decades, china which was the
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 country in the world that had billions of residents now decreased to
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 place.
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, of course, it can not be ignored that building new dwellings is an effective approach but only for those
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 that have enough land, as smaller
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 like Sri Lanka cannot even think about making shelters because they do not have sufficient land.
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, many developed
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 as Canada and America have a lot of available space,
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, they can either build skyscrapers in cities or can
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 construct houses in rural areas.
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, various
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 facing population problems can
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 start living together without making new houses which will increase the bonding of family and love. In conclusion, while rich
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 are financially strong and they
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 have enough land to build new apartments, developing
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 should encourage their citizens toward birth control and birth prevention to solve
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 difficulty.

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • infrastructure
  • urban sprawl
  • amenities
  • employment opportunities
  • public transportation
  • rural landscape
  • cost of living
  • recreational space
  • community development
  • subsidies
  • tax breaks
  • sustainability
  • economic impact
  • public services
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