The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
line
charts compare the number of use of electrical appliances in Use synonyms
households
and the average Use synonyms
time
Use synonyms
spending
in a week in a particular country over a period of 99 years.
The first Replace the word
spent
line
graph clearly Use synonyms
show
Change the verb form
shows
that
increases Correct determiner usage
the
the
percentage Change preposition
in the
use
of electrical appliances in Change preposition
of use
households
over Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
time
. In 1920, none of the Use synonyms
refrigerator
is being used and it rose Change to a plural noun
refrigerators
with
significantly after Change preposition
apply
year
Add an article
a year
of
1920. In 1980, all of the people Change preposition
apply
had
owned Unnecessary verb
apply
refrigerator
and maintain a steady until 2019.
In 1920, the percentage of Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
households
using Use synonyms
washing
machine and vacuum cleaner were 30% and 40%, Add an article
the washing
a washing
respectivley
. Both shows Correct your spelling
respectively
rises
percentage over Wrong verb form
rising
time
with Use synonyms
a small differences
Correct the article-noun agreement
small differences
a small difference
on
washing machine dropped from 70% to 65% from Change preposition
in
year
1960 to 1980. In Change the article
the year
year
2000, washing Change the article
the year
machine
have been 100% displaced Fix the agreement mistake
machines
the
Correct article usage
apply
households
, Use synonyms
while
vacuum Linking Words
cleaner
only Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
have
Change the verb form
has
do
the 75% of Change the verb form
done
households
in 2019.
The Use synonyms
seond
Correct your spelling
second
line
graph shows a Use synonyms
line
with gradually dropped Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
in
the
Correct article usage
apply
time
Use synonyms
spending
on housework from 1920 to 2019. For Replace the word
spent
infomation
, doing Correct your spelling
information
houseworl
50 hours per week in 1920 and around 11 hours per week in 2019.Correct your spelling
housework
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