IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7.5

More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

#students #study #colleges #universities #countries
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Nowadays most
students
Use synonyms
 prefer to get a master's degree from a foreign university because of the following reasons,
universities
Use synonyms
 have the most qualified professors, fully equipped research labs and updated
courses
Use synonyms
 with respect to
technology
Use synonyms
 .Even though it has a minor effect on
students
Use synonyms
 .
This
Linking Words
 essay is going to depict the benefits and effects towards
students
Use synonyms
 who choose a master's program up broad
Firstly
Linking Words
 ,
universities
Use synonyms
 will only have teachers who are qualified with their college standards ,
courses
Use synonyms
 will be modified according to the recent development in
technology
Use synonyms
 and
universities
Use synonyms
 will have high-end research labs which can improve
students
Use synonyms
' interest in the course .
For instance
Linking Words
, Machine learning and Artificial intelligence are booming
technology
Use synonyms
 so a lot of foreign
universities
Use synonyms
 have updated their
courses
Use synonyms
 and introduced these new technologies with the required laboratories whereas in India these were added to the list of
courses
Use synonyms
 but there is no updation in the infrastructure.
Moreover
Linking Words
 to
this
Linking Words
, there are other advantages to choosing a master's in a foreign university
such
Linking Words
 as being independent and
also
Linking Words
 handling all the required needs by themselves make them stronger even than before .Going up broad increases pupils' scope because of their exposure to the course.
on the other hand
Linking Words
, there are cons to studying in colleges that are far from their homes they can meet their parents or go to their hometown when they want.
For example
Linking Words
, when they study in their own county they can go to homes when they get holidays but
this
Linking Words
 is not the same as studying far from their homes they can't go whenever they want to because of the high price of tickets.
In addition
Linking Words
 to
this
Linking Words
 , they need to follow new culture once they go to a new place to live which makes it hard for
students
Use synonyms
 to change the things they use to follow from the time they were born. Leaving their native country and going far from their loved ones will be a difficult task. In conclusion,Going to other countries is becoming quite popular among
students
Use synonyms
 because of the recent updation in
courses
Use synonyms
 with respect to
technology
Use synonyms
 and having greater infrastructure has more advantages than disadvantages.
Submitted by kallipoornima9999 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cross-cultural understanding
  • Specialized courses
  • Personal growth
  • Financial strain
  • Tuition
  • Cultural differences
  • Isolation
  • Homesickness
  • Educational systems
  • Academic performance
What to do next:
Look at other essays: