Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others, however, believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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that undergraduates are encouraged to choose their favourite subjects to study. In my opinion,

however

, it would be more beneficial if they choose majors that are helpful for them after their graduation. On the one hand, there are some reasons why people believe that learners at institutions should choose what to learn depending on their

preference

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. The

first

reason is that

this

choice allows

students

to unlock their

potentials

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. It is widely acknowledged that

students

only perform well if they are given the choice to learn what they enjoy.

Moreover

, while they are spending time

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researching

reasearching

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researching

, they might come up with something extraordinary.

For instance

,

students

whose majors are music may accidentally write breathtaking melodies using music theories and techniques that they obtain from their lessons. The

second

reason to support

this

opinion is that the rate of those who drop out of school will be declined. To be more specific, learners go to class to do something they love. What is more, they are willing to devote their time and efforts to

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.

Hence

, they are exhilarated by the knowledge and they will be more eager to learn.

On the other hand

, I would argue that studying

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subjects would be of use for

students

’ future.

Firstly

,

these knowledge

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will help them to find a stable job with a high income after they graduate.

For example

, the demand for the workforce in computer

science

in Vietnam is increasing rapidly. Specifically, more companies are trying to recruit candidates who are well-qualified in

this

sector and offer good salaries starting from approximately $1000. For that reason, there will be a high chance for them to be employed after graduating.

Secondly

, if

students

don’t study

science

subjects, there will be an imbalance in the job market. If too many people follow their dream jobs, there will be

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workers who take over jobs related to

science

and technology. As a consequence, there will be a shortage

in

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staff required for

this

sector. In conclusion, even though

students

might have the option for their favourite disciplines. I personally believe that they should focus on

science

and technology for their future.