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, the job market is ready to expand itself again.
This
is the cause of the
decision
by a big society to open a new
establishment
in my
area
. The fact will obviously lead to consequences for local people. Despite someone may
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think
that
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will bring a lot of
advantages
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the place, I'm convinced that the new factory will be a problem for it.
This
essay will examine the
advantages
and disadvantages of the
decision
to expand a business like
this
in the
location
where I grew
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For many
the new
establishment
is a very good factor for the autochthonous community
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because the main
advantages
of
this
are the creation of new workplaces for local employees and the increased attractiveness of the
area
for new investors.
Firstly
, the bad economy and the lower salaries of the
last
years
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a large
of
familyFix the agreement mistake
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in a poor financial situation. The new factory can contribute to
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the local economy, bringing new job opportunities and higher salaries than in the past, but in my
the problem still
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that only one
establishment
cannot guarantee
financial support for all the workers.
Secondly
, the flow of
capitalsFix the agreement mistake
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in the
area
can improve after
this
first
company's investment, many pieces of research show that when a society
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investingChange the verb form
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money in a
location
, other
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can be brought from new industries
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believe in the opportunity
ofChange preposition
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expandChange the verb form
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their business. If the
area
is profitable due to various
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,
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will invest money
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it and,
consequently
, the
location
will become rich.
Nevertheless
, building a new
establishment
in
this
place has
disadvantages, because it is
for its natural
and uniqueness. The two major disadvantages are
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environmentReplace the word
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pollution and the decrease
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natural
tourism
which bring
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the
area
a big wealth each
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according to statistics.
What's more, the construction of the new factory will increase the waste and toxic gas
and
this
is not
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for a
location
for
hisCorrect pronoun usage
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green spaces and natural beauty.
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, it will lead
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a lowering of the air's quality and the river's purity.
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to that, the industry ties to
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tourism
will lose points, decreasing the appeal of the
area
in the tourist's mind. Due to
this
, despite the creation of new jobs thanks to the
establishment
, the local economy
be damaged
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the absence of
tourism
.
To conclude, I believe that the
decision
to open a new enterprise in
this
location
has its own
advantages
such
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extended opportunity for locals to work and the
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possibility to attract more investors and as consequence new
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, but,
nevertheless
, in my
opinionAdd the comma(s)
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these benefits do not outweigh the
, so the
area
should contrast
this
decision
in order to remain a leader in the
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tourism
in the country