A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your locality. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory establishment? Explain your position.

After months of

crisis

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, the job market is ready to expand itself again.

This

is the cause of the

decision

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taken

taked

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taken

by a big society to open a new

establishment

in my

area

. The fact will obviously lead to consequences for local people. Despite someone may

can

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think

that

is

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it

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will bring a lot of

advantages

for

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the place, I'm convinced that the new factory will be a problem for it.

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essay will examine the

advantages

and disadvantages of the

decision

to expand a business like

this

in the

location

where I grew

.

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For many

people

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the new

establishment

is a very good factor for the autochthonous community

,

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because the main

advantages

of

this

are the creation of new workplaces for local employees and the increased attractiveness of the

area

for new investors.

Firstly

, the bad economy and the lower salaries of the

last

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few

fex

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years

have

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take

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taken

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a large

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percentage

percentuage

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percentage

of

family

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families

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in a poor financial situation. The new factory can contribute to

increase

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increasing

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the local economy, bringing new job opportunities and higher salaries than in the past, but in my

opinion

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the problem still

remain

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that only one

establishment

cannot guarantee

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enough

enoguh

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enough

financial support for all the workers.

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, the flow of

capitals

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in the

area

can improve after

this

first

company's investment, many pieces of research show that when a society

decide

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investing

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to invest

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money in a

location

, other

capitals

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capital

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can be brought from new industries

who

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believe in the opportunity

of

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to

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expand

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expanding

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their business. If the

area

is profitable due to various

reason

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reasons

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,

company

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the company

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will invest money

on

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in

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it and,

consequently

, the

location

will become rich.

Nevertheless

, building a new

establishment

in

this

place has

incredibile

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incredible

disadvantages, because it is

renowed

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renowned

for its natural

attracativeness

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attractiveness

and uniqueness. The two major disadvantages are

the

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environment

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pollution and the decrease

of

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natural

tourism

which bring

in

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the

area

a big wealth each

years

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according to statistics. What's more, the construction of the new factory will increase the waste and toxic gas

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produced

production

producted

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produced

and

this

is not

a good news

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for a

location

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famous

famouse

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famous

for

his

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its

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green spaces and natural beauty.

For instance

, it will lead

on

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a lowering of the air's quality and the river's purity. In

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addition

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addiction

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to that, the industry ties to

the

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natural

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tourism

will lose points, decreasing the appeal of the

area

in the tourist's mind. Due to

this

, despite the creation of new jobs thanks to the

establishment

, the local economy

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will

wll

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will

be damaged

for

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the absence of

tourism

. To conclude, I believe that the

decision

to open a new enterprise in

this

location

has its own

advantages

such

an

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extended opportunity for locals to work and the

the

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possibility to attract more investors and as consequence new

capitals

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capital

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, but,

nevertheless

, in my

opinion

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these benefits do not outweigh the

disadvantes

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disadvantages

, so the

area

should contrast

this

decision

in order to remain a leader in the

natural

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tourism

in the country