Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of societ. Others, However, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays

children

are the future adults, So great attention should be given

for

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their growing and teaching them to be good members of

society

. The debate is about whose responsibility is

this

. Some people think that

the

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parents

should teach them that. As

children

spend most of their time at home with their

parents

. Beginning from their birth, they just watch how they move and live,

then

begin to make voices and speak like them until they grow more and begin to not only see them as

parents

but

also

as role models, whom they act like them, treat with people like them.

Children

learn how to deal with different situations from their

parents

, either by directly speaking to

parents

or just watching them. For the

children

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the right is what their

parents

do and the wrong is what they don’t. You can’t ask a child to stop a habit or do another while their

parents

are opposing it. Old people once said that the child is his parent’s mirror, So the

parents

have to deal with their responsibility toward

society

and give much care to their

children

.

However

, Others think that the

school

is the place to teach them how to be good members.

This

point of view relies on that

school

is the

first

outside place for the

children

, far from home, a totally new world for them.

Besides

School

has a better chance to

be

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controlled by

society

. General rules should be made and applied in schools. Different studies evolved about the best teaching methods in schools, and their results as grown adults. A good system should be followed starting from the choice of teachers, to

designing

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of buildings, timetables, how they spend their spare time, etc... . I think growing

children

is a cooperative process,

should

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be done with

parents

and

school

helping each other. A linkage should always be made between

parents

and

school

to discuss different new statuses of

children

and how they can deal with it, stop bad habits, teach good manners, and do whatever

it

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needs. In order to get a

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well grown

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adult who can be good

members

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of their

society

.