In most countries, with the widespread of the use of Internet, people have more freedom to choose to work and study at home instead of travelling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, with technology developed,

people

who are living in most countries have

freedom

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the freedom

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to choose

work

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to work

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or

study

at home

instead

of

traveling

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travelling

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to

office

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the office

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or college. Some

people

think

work

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working

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or

study

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studying

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at home with

internet

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the internet

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is the advantage outweigh the disadvantage. I strongly agree with

this

mind. In most developed nations,

internet

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the internet

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has been used in

widespread

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a widespread

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area

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areas

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.

People

can do their job or

study

online. They do not need to go to their office or school every day. Because they think distance

work

or

study

is more suitable for them. They can address their job everywhere and

every

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at every

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time

.

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, you can see

people

using their

laptop

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laptops

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and working on

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the bus

a bus

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bus

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buses

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or on

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the train

a train

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train

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trains

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, even in the library or in a cafe.

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simple reason is due to

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the high

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high speed

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internet

system.

Therefore

, through the

internet

,

people

can do their job more

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efficiency

efficiently

efficency

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efficiently

and convenience.

On the other hand

, distance

work

or

study

can help

people

save

time

and energy

consume

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consumption

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although

it might reduce some opportunities

of

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for

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community

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the community

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face to face. It is because

that

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people

do not need to spend lots of

time

on their way to their company or college, especially

at

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during

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traffic

hour

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hours

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. Meanwhile,

people

maybe do not need

office

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offices

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any more

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anymore

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because all the things could be done online. Thereby, saving

time

, reducing energy

cost

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costs

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,

avoiding

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and avoiding

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pollution

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the pollution

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of

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from

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traffic are benefits for

whole

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society. In conclusion, distance working or studying is a better way

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than then

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then

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the

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tradition

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traditional

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method

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methods

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. We’d better to

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tocontinuing

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continuing

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continually

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develop technology in order to establish

more

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apply

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faster and more stable

internet

system.