Some people believe public libraries are not important for people, others disagree about this statement. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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like minded
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people advocate that there is no need
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conclusion with the advancement of my knowledge along with my personal viewpoint. To commence with
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view,
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is not essential for
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due to
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services. To be precise, nowadays,
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topic on
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, they feel they have no need to go
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for searching books or information about anything because they easily get data in
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time
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, time for study. Apart from
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way of reducing
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of paper, as everyone
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and electronic books they have no need
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material if they go
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they use paper books.
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give
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priority to electronic information rather than visiting in
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. In the
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justification
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view,
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have their own importance in
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life, as they get reliable knowledge only by visiting in
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sometimes it provides inaccurate knowledge.
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because it provides accurate material.
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gives atmosphere to
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the student
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for study. To elaborate, if a reader read
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by sitting in
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they can easily
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concentrate
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. In conclusion,
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consider that
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have no role due to
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availability
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availbility
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availability
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yet, some
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