Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from TV as well as from international sporting competitions. To what extent do you agree?Find essays with the same topic

In
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modern era, there
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plenty
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kind
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of
sports
involving violence. Some individuals believe that violent
sports
should be prohibited from TV including globalization sporting competitions while others disagree with
this
idea and think that it should be publicized
sports
to society.
This
essay will be examined the reasons to support
this
idea in detail.
Initially
, sporting violence
is
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concerned
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the majority of parents because they thought that their children might imitate violent actions from sporting.
For instance
, there are many children who followed actions from boxing. Children could role-play as a boxer and have
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fight
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with their peers.
As a result
, the rate of accidence
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to increase.
Additionally
, there are some
people
who
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gamble from
sports
.
For example
, audiences' boxing
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an
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athlete
who
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they
chosen
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.
On the other hand
, there are a group of
people
who disagree with
this
idea because
this
is the best way to share cultures from country to country through
sports
.
For example
, Taekwondo from Korea is a famous sport in which numerous
people
from different nations are interested and even
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a serious course.
Moreover
, many
people
learn to protect themselves from dangers.
For instance
, a girl could defend herself from a thief.
Therefore
, it is a necessary martial arts skill everyone must know. To conclude, it can be seen that there are several reasons to support each point of view. There is a good reason for the agreement point of view.
However
, I still strongly agree that my disagreement has far more benefits than the agree side.
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