Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from TV as well as from international sporting competitions. To what extent do you agree?Find essays with the same topic
In
this
modern era, there are
plenty Change the verb form
is
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of kind
kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
sports
involving violence. Some individuals believe that violent sports
should be prohibited from TV including globalization sporting competitions while others disagree with this
idea and think that it should be publicized sports
to society. This
essay will be examined the reasons to support this
idea in detail.
Initially
, sporting violence is
concerned Unnecessary verb
apply
by
the majority of parents because they thought that their children might imitate violent actions from sporting. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, there are many children who followed actions from boxing. Children could role-play as a boxer and have serious
Add an article
a serious
fight
with their peers. Fix the agreement mistake
fights
As a result
, the rate of accidence tend
to increase. Change the verb form
tends
Additionally
, there are some people
who addicted
gamble from Add a missing verb
are addicted
sports
. For example
, audiences' boxing gamble
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gambles
an
athlete Change preposition
on an
who
they Change the pronoun
whom
chosen
.
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chose
have chosen
On the other hand
, there are a group of people
who disagree with this
idea because this
is the best way to share cultures from country to country through sports
. For example
, Taekwondo from Korea is a famous sport in which numerous people
from different nations are interested and even taking
a serious course. Wrong verb form
take
Moreover
, many people
learn to protect themselves from dangers. For instance
, a girl could defend herself from a thief. Therefore
, it is a necessary martial arts skill everyone must know.
To conclude, it can be seen that there are several reasons to support each point of view. There is a good reason for the agreement point of view. However
, I still strongly agree that my disagreement has far more benefits than the agree side.Submitted by prnpt4i on
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