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Education for young people is important in many countries. However, others think government should spend more money for education in adult population who cannot read and write. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days, many
people
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 argue that it is necessary to give more knowledge to the young than to the old. but some believe that the government should
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 teach the elderly to read and write. I totally disagree with
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 idea because,
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 of all, the future is in the hands of young
people
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.
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, the elderly
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 need knowledge. On the one hand, it is very important to support the
youth
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 by creating
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 conditions for them to get a good education
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 because when the government pays more attention to the
youth
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, it is good for the country.
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, young
people
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 are inventing many things now.
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, the memory of young
people
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 is much better than that of old
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. It is clear that after the age of 27
people
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's memory begins to fade.
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, mature generations can do many things because they are more energetic and mentally strong than the elderly.
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, the elderly should not be forgotten because they may not have had the same conditions when they were young.
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, many elderly
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 could not write in Latin, so some felt it was important to teach them.
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, if older
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 are educated, it is beneficial for the
youth
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, because when the elderly are educated,
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 they can be an example to the
youth
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.
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, the elderly may have family concerns so they may not be able to spare time for studying. In conclusion, currently, it is not necessary to spend a lot of money on the education of the elderly. Because the future is in the hands of the
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,
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it is better to invest more in the
youth
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • education
  • young people
  • government
  • money
  • adult population
  • read
  • write
  • development
  • nation
  • improve
  • quality of life
  • investing
  • reduced
  • poverty
  • income inequality
  • funds
  • balancing
  • budget allocation
  • crucial
  • equal access
  • opportunities
  • promoting
  • literacy
  • numeracy
  • positive effects
  • society
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