Education for young people is important in many countries. However, others think government should spend more money for education in adult population who cannot read and write. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, many

people

argue that it is necessary to give more knowledge to the young than to the old. but some believe that the government should

also

teach the elderly to read and write. I totally disagree with

this

idea because,

first

of all, the future is in the hands of young

people

.

Secondly

, the elderly

also

need knowledge. On the one hand, it is very important to support the

youth

by creating

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conditions for them to get a good education

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because when the government pays more attention to the

youth

, it is good for the country.

For example

, young

people

are inventing many things now.

Also

, the memory of young

people

is much better than that of old

people

. It is clear that after the age of 27

people

's memory begins to fade.

In addition

, mature generations can do many things because they are more energetic and mentally strong than the elderly.

On the other hand

, the elderly should not be forgotten because they may not have had the same conditions when they were young.

For example

, many elderly

people

could not write in Latin, so some felt it was important to teach them.

Also

, if older

people

are educated, it is beneficial for the

youth

, because when the elderly are educated,

then

they can be an example to the

youth

.

Moreover

, the elderly may have family concerns so they may not be able to spare time for studying. In conclusion, currently, it is not necessary to spend a lot of money on the education of the elderly. Because the future is in the hands of the

youth

,

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it is better to invest more in the

youth

.