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In many countries women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first few months after the birth of their baby. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

#countries #women #maternity #jobs #first #months #birth #baby
In my view
women
 should be given time to spend with their newly born babies to take care of them until they grow to a certain
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however
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long term
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 leave for certain
women
 who just got
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conceived
concieved
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conceived
 might
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affect
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effect
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affect
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 their financial situation if
thier
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their
 family completely depends on them economically but if
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 amount of time and care is not given to the
child
 they might fall terribly ill. keeping in view of
this
 many companies across different countries provides maternity leave in the beginning months of the
child
although
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in spite
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spite
 of having certain productivity issues within the organisation.
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 the baby is the foremost important aspect for a mother until the
child
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breast feeding
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 and other food intakes
in addition
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this
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proper care can never be taken by any other person other than the mother.There is a survey that said that children who
grows
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 under
shadow
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 of their mother
tends
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 to be more healthy and fit in their growing years,
this
 actually shows impact once the
child
 gets into a teenage. In
short
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i
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 would like to conclude that there are more advantages rather than disadvantages of providing extra time for
women
 with their children and
also
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 would suggest
few
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a few
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 recommendations for
further
more
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financial aid to the family if the woman is a single working parent which helps them economically stable ,
this
 gesture from the
componies
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companies
 might earn a loyal
employe
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employee
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 for them.
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 the organizations should hire some temporary staff while the absence of
women
 who are
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leave
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improves the productivity rate
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 huge
number
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.
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 the basic salary to
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in charge
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the incharge
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incharge
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charge
 might not be considered
as
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 loss due to
balance
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the balance
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 of
work
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is
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 well maintained.
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