Some people think that it is important to be physically strong to be successful in sport, however others think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about the significance of physical or mental
strength
in Use synonyms
Use synonyms
sport
. It is thought that in order to succeed in sports we have to maintain physical Fix the agreement mistake
sports
strength
, while others believe that mental Use synonyms
health
is more essential. I believe that a combination and maintenance of two Use synonyms
health
is the best option to succeed in the Use synonyms
Use synonyms
sport
sphere.
On the one hand, I agree that physical Change the noun form
sports
health
plays a major role for those who are involved in Use synonyms
Use synonyms
sport
sphere. All kinds of competitions require a lot Correct article usage
the sport
effort
and physical investment for successful performance and results. Change preposition
of effort
For instance
, I used to do Linking Words
sport
for 8 years before I gave up. I can still recall the moments Use synonyms
where
I devoted plenty of time Correct word choice
when
for
gaining physical Change preposition
to
strength
. Use synonyms
As a
Linking Words
result
a large Add a comma
,result
quantity
of performances Change the quantifier
number
were
accomplished successfully, Change the verb form
was
thus
I believe that Linking Words
an
attention Remove the article
apply
for
physical Change preposition
to
strength
should be paid.
Mental Use synonyms
health
supports us while dealing with challenges, pressures and stressors that may face every human, not only sports people. Our mental Use synonyms
strength
can reduce the fear of failure when we work toward goals and stay in stable emotional resilience. Use synonyms
For instance
, Gennady Golovkin is the most successful man in boxing who has won 42 performances with knockouts. In his Linking Words
last
Linking Words
interview
he said that people had to have the ability to not give a free rein to emotions and feelings which can lead a person off the right path. Mental Add a comma
,interview
health
is able to give us Use synonyms
a
confidence not to give up.
To sum up, I strongly believe that both types of Correct article usage
the
health
should be evaluated and appreciated equally.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite