Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one?

In most schools all over the world,

students

have their own mobile phones regardless of their

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. While these devices can undoubtedly play a pivotal role in safety, communication and even learning, many schools have chosen to restrain their

use

on campus. In

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,

this

is a positive statement and can bring benefits not only academically, but

also

physically and in terms of socially. Restricting phone

use

in the

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classroom

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classroom

can improve learning.

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is

purely

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because, without these

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of devices, there are far fewer distractions for

students

and teachers. To illustrate, when a student who got bored can take a glance at something

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media or messages alike on his/her phone.

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example may be not important for most people but

this

might lead to

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teared

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from

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their teachers and several

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effect

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on his/her academic career.

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kind of limitation during class

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a

positively

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role in their school life, furnishes them to focus

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more importantly.

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, banning phones in the classroom,

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school

restricts

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their

use

outside

class

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can

also

expect

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improvements

inprovements

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improvements

in the social ability of

students

.

First

of all, if phones are banned at lunchtime and break, children are forced to engage in

a more meaningful issues

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with their classmates and

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another benefical activity

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beneficial

activities including

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a book or magazine. They may play games,

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or do something else and of course

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socialise

each

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other and these all

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activities

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are far healthier

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that

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sitting alone and

huncing

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hunting

hunching

over a smartphone. These social and physical benefits are only possible with strict rules.

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conclusion,despite

it

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is irrefutable that smartphones are a crucial part of our lives, I strongly feel that their

use

in school should be limited. With these restrictions under

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some

stipulation

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,

students

are able to learn better,

fortify

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and fortify

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friendships and social abilities.