Some people think international events such as the Olympic games are important and can bring nations together. Others however think that they are a waste of money as money could be spent on more issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered by some individuals that activities uniting

countries

of the world

such

as sporting

events

are essential and should be held, while others believe these occasions are means of wasting resources. In my opinion, I think the

countries

should continue to hold these

events

because they promote economic growth and acculturation. On the one hand, the monies spent

in

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organising these international

events

can be diverted to other essential aspects of the

country

. Take

for

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example, the funds that will be used to organize an event can be used to build a hospital that will

last

for decades.

Furthermore

, the resources

that

is

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utilised for

this

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this event

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events

catering

for

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a few number people can be used for national activities that will meet the needs of many citizens.

On the other hand

, I believe these international

events

are essential because it promotes acculturation and

this

promotes peace.

In other words

, visiting other

countries

during these

events

allow people to understand the culture of other nations.

This

will

further

promote peaceful co-existence

amongst

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the

countries

of the world.

In addition

, these

events

also

boost the economy of the host

country

.

This

means money is brought

in to

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the

country

in form of tickets purchased to view the

events

, hotel bookings and tourism in the

country

.

For instance

, hotel rooms are usually very scarce during the Olympic games in the city where it is held. In conclusion, while some people believe international occasions are not essential, I think they are vital because it promotes peace across the world and it improves the economy

or

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of

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the host

country

.