Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will provide better care for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is a very challenging decision for working
parents
to decide if their children
have to be sent to childcare
centres
or to be taken care
of by grandparents. There are many parents
who are opting for childcare
centres
whereas many others argue that it is always better if the children
are taken care
of by family members or grandparents. This
essay discusses both views and also
like portrays my opinion on this
.
People who opt for childcare
centres
argue that the brain development of children
is fast in childcare
centres
. Childcare
centres
give activities for brain development. For example
, the early learning education system followed by many childcare
centres
helps child's
brain development. Correct article usage
a child's
Also
, childcare
centres
allow children
to interact more with other children
which is develop general acceptance and interacting skills.
On the other hand
, people who opt for family members to take care
of kids
argue about the security feeling. Working parents
will be more secure and comfortable giving kids
to one of their family members and this
helps parents
to work without any anxiety. For example
, a parent can call family
Correct article usage
a family
member
anytime during the workhours and seek the well-being of the kid. Fix the agreement mistake
members
Moreover
, the latter view helps kids
to realise the value of family relations and will help to increase family bonding. I support the latter view as I have been raised by my grandparentsparents
and Correct your spelling
grandparents parents
grand parents parents
this
helped me to understand the value of relationships.
To Conclude, Children
should be taken care
of carefully with extra attention. for this
, both views are considerable and parents
should take a decision, considering all aspects and that decision should help kids
and parents
in all aspects.Submitted by bilujohn on
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