some people argue higher taxes should be collected from industries causing higher industrial pollution, whereas others argue there are better ways to deal it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Few people often argue that more
taxes
should be collected by the industrialists as they produce a higher amount of pollution
. While in contrast
, according to other members of society, there are several better ways to deal with it. In this
,essay both scenarios are discussed.
To commence with,going from the former perspective, demanding high taxes
from the industrial sector could cause the downfall of the economy of one's native land. And if they will be pressurize to pay more taxes
they will try to set up their factories elsewhere . Other than that most of the companies are already spending a decent percentage of their total expenditure in the sector of pollution
control department. For instance
,recently a thesis was being broadcasted on television about how electricity is generated from demineralized water. And rather than leaving the residue of the process directly in the canals or river, it is treated through several processes and goes out of the premises only when it reaches the desired parameters. However
, most of the population thinks that it is reasonable to charge hefty amounts from industries in form of taxes
.
Nonetheless
,according to the latter outlook, there are several better options to overcome the problem of pollution
rather than imposing further
taxes
on the manufacturing sector. Other ways such
as educating more and more people about the adverse effects of pollution
. Moreover
, teaching them ways to minimize pollution
in their daily life activities. And other than that one should try not to go overboard while enjoying recreational activities such
as bursting crackers on Diwali as it causes an increment in air pollution
.
By way of conclusion,i
strongly advocate the latter viewpoint and agree with it. Change the capitalization
I
However
, the government can set up some new guidelines regarding pollution
caused by industries that would be much strict than the previous ones.Submitted by srvmann on
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