Some people say that e- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspapers and magazines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern technology has replaced almost all of the traditional methods in all
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activities. Some people
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that e-books and modern technology will
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replace
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newspaper and magazines which are called
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traditional channels for communicating information. I
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agree with
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of
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made all
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communications
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very easy.
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has
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changed the old concept of book publishing .
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recent research conducted by MG university shows that
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way of physical book publishing has been reduced dramatically, as the public depends more on
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e-book and
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e-magazines.
Moreover
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can be printed and
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available to the user based on the demand and
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can be raised during the ordering process on
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which can reduce
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wastage of paper.
Secondly
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high bandwidth
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connections which help them to broadcast multiple
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span of time. Wide usage of mobile
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among
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has boosted
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the demand
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e-
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point
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time whereas
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traditional newspaper publish only once in day or
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time to reach
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the end user.
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such
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will be very helpful to
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. To conclude, development in technology has replaced the traditional way of doing things and all resulted in a
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way to enhance human life.
Likewise
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such
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news
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modern techniques and
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will serve more
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human
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-books (electronic books)
  • digital media
  • traditional media
  • interactivity
  • multimedia
  • tactile experience
  • preservation
  • nostalgia
  • digital divide
  • digital fatigue
  • screen time
  • financial viability
  • misinformation
  • instantaneous access
  • environmental sustainability
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