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In future, robots may do more of the work that is done by humans today. Would the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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No one can deny that Technology is rising very fastly and artificial intelligence will be making robots and they helping massive
work
 in
future
. There are many advantages and disadvantages as well I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with the advantages, Many developed nations will be working with
this
 technology and it is good for their economy and machinery will be useful for all individual's
work
 and a few years later it will be very common all around the world. To explain,
Roberts
's machines are really beneficial for any region because big business factories will be not hiring employees they only provided machinery workers
such
 as
Roberts
's man.
For example
, In the USA experts will declare that all
Roberts
 will
be benefits
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their country's economy and a chunk amount of money will be invested by the international authority for
this
 experiment.
Thus
, It is clear that artificial machinery will be helpful for all kinds of
work
 and they working hard
instead
 of human beings. To commence with the disadvantages, It has always some hazards things will reduce by these technologies and it has risks to all people's life because some scientists believe that
Roberts
 is not good in eventual.
In other words
, The world's largest markets will be investing all their money in artificial development
besides
 growing their own nation recession and it dangerous for their country because they think the climate effect will not solve and every year they paid for solved the environmental problems
instead
 of invest in
Roberts
.
For instance
, The world's richest American businessman said that
Roberts
 will be harmful in
future
 because Elbert Einstein reveal that phenomenon before her
die
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 they told
Roberts
 will not
work
 in
future
 and they will be ordered to human beings for their
work
.
Hence
, It is a risk for all region's populations and it will be impacted in
future
. In conclusion,
Although
 artificial
Roberts
 will be useful for some purposes they will not be safe for
human's
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 commands.
Moreover
, Without the
Roberts
 is good for the globe and working
by
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 people is easy
instead
 of other things.
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