You have seen an advertisement looking for volunteers to teach English overseas. Write to the recruitment office. In your letter -Tell them where you saw the advertisement -Explain why you would like to go -Describe the skills that you have that you think would help

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Dear sir/ madam, I am writing a letter to inform you that I am interested to work for free as an English teacher in other territories. I saw in entertainment media that your company is on hire for applicants who are willing to be part of the program. I am fond of travelling outside the land and visiting other countries to experience how to live and adapt to some of their cultures. For

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reason, your publication is a way for me to reach other areas and fulfil my dreams in the near future. I graduated

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2020 with a degree of Bachelor of Science in Education, and my major is English subject. I am currently working at the university and specialising in teaching the English language. I am pretty sure that I have a high standard of qualifications to become qualified for the position you are looking for. I am hoping for your feedback as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, XXX

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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