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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages

#people #risks #lives
It is essential for human beings to take risks, in their
occupation
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lives
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 internal
lives
. yet, there
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 some
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disagreement
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 on whether the overall impact of risk-taking in our daily life has been positive or negative,
however
, I believe that the advantages of
this
 trend going on far outweigh its disadvantages.
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people
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 of the importance of risk-taking as the days pass by. on the plus side of
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phenomenon
 whit our daily internal activity many could be
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such
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 new things the more
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intriguing
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 each day going to get rather than living the same life with no changes
thus
 our purpose of living can become
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versatile
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consignee
 of risking.
although
 the advantages of blending risks with
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issues
 are
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impossible
 to ignore , as there are
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 indicating that
such
 as big companies which risked to do global trades
moreover
 yeilding to
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 amount of income.
However
, the downsides can not be ignored, risk-taking can place many
people
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business
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businesses
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serious
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jeopardy
. take a kid who decides to take a
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trip
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train
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advantage
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adventure
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 his internal life or what if a
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company
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 that could have excelled in
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their
thier
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their
 new trade loses all the investment provided that taking risks can have a no turning back
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effect
effects
 on both personal and
professinal
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professional
lives
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 and why many won't leave
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their
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 that the
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 has had a
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positive
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positive
 impact on
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myriads
myriad
 of
people
's way of living because of its influence on
people
 and
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companies
succses
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success
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