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Overall, the widespead use of the internet has mostly positive effect on life in today's world

#widespead #internet #effect #life #world
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internet
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have
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became
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 essential to everyone, even students. Most
of
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the
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people
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internet
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 and they can search
all
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 information that they want with one click. Personally, I
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belive
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believe
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internet
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the internet
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 has made our lives
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easier
eassier
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easier
,
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especially
especeally
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especially
 when some
people
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 are not in their countries. I feel
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wich
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 I will explore in the following essay.
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internet
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 is vital in our lives.
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,
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internet
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have
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 helped
that
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apply
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people
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 can find a
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 information without
to need
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 books,
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libraries
library
 or encyclopedias.
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Furthermore
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, now we have
internet
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in
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 the bus,
airplane
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 and streets and
people
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 can
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connect
conect
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connect
free
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 and without limits. Thanks to
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internet
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 ,
people
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 have news around the world
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immediately
inmediatly
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immediately
 without
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 the T.V only using
cellphone
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a cellphone
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, laptop or computer. My own experience is
compelling
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example
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this
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. When the pandemic a
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people
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 and students
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 couldn't go to schools and jobs the pandemic became a caos, the
soution
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 was everyone started to use their computers or laptop from their houses and
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 with their jobs and
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schools to
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schools
 able to continue working and studying.
Secondly
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,
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,
tenhologie
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technologies
have
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inveted
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invented
 social media.
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, everyone
have
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platforms
plataforms
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platforms
 where
people
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 is connecting with their families or friends.
Long
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 time ago, when
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 had to
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, most of them wrote letters and
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the
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international call was very expensive. The letters took a long time to reach their destination and
also
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eassiest
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easiest
easier
to
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people
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message
meassage
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message
, from any place to be
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close
their
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 country , families, and friends.
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, I live in
Canad
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Canada
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 and I
useinternet
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use internet
 all time because I have family in Europa and miss
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lot , it is important to me to talk with them
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everyday
everydays
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every day
 and be able to feel close to me. In conclusion,
Internet
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 has been the greatest
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invention
inevetion
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intervention
 in the world and has revolutionized the way
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comunication
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communication
 like nothing before.
This
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 to expand the horizons like infrastructure, the humans working to create a new
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technology
tenhology
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technology
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