In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
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in foreign
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countries
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advantages
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lifestyle
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lifestyle
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life
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a
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feel
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students
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degrees
people
set the trend of going to
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a disadvantage
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disadvantages
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outline
some of the major Change the verb form
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reason
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reasons
such
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lifestyle
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lifestyle
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culture
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