People should keep trying to reach their goals, even if they seem impossible to achive

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differents
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types of
goals
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. The
goals
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related
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competition
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competition
when anyone
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to
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demonstrate
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others
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persons
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and
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learning. Personally,
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I believe
that everyone should have
goals
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in their
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lives
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, but
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implies that we need effort and discipline. I feel
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way for two main reasons,
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wich
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explore in the following essay.
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,
Goals
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the most important activities in the
life
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of
persons
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improve
people
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's quality of
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,
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allow
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of persons thinking what happen in their
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lives
life
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and where they want to go. My own
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experience
experince
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experience
in compelling
this
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. When I arrived
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,
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I didn't
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I didn't
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know
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speak English and since
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I thought that I had to learn English from the beginning that was my goal until now. I did
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in
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online and I learned
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,
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write
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and
reading
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, as result , now will be able to go
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.
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, Most
people
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think that
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their goal is impossible , but
people
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should think
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possible if they move their comfort zone. It is vital that society
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sharing
their
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with families,
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and friends
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and never give up, and
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eliminate their fears and thoughts.
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society
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t
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have clear
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, they will be lost. It is significant that
people
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have a goal
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improve
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their productivity in their lives and
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boots
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their self-esteem.
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, my brother-in-law,
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didn'
t
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have
goals
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in his
life
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, he was lost and he didn'
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care about anything.
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, now he is
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person, he
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a goal,
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goal was to do
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interview for a job and
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moment he is working in a company , his
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changed and he is very happy. In conclusion, I strongly
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believe
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belive
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believe
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that though the goal
seem
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seems
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impossible
imposible
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impossible
the
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society never
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up , they must plan it and dream it and with effort and
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all everything
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achieve
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achive
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achieved
.

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