The stage and equipment used in the cement production How cement is used to produce concrete for building porposes. Report the main futures

The processes of making cement and
then
producing from it concrete are complex processes that consist of many stages.
Firstly
, the cement raw materials are limestone and clay, which are passed together between two rolls of a crusher and exit as a powder into the mixer. They are passed
then
into a rotating heater where a flame is directed into it. The powder
then
passes through a grinder to exit in smaller particles as cement, to the
last
step of packing them in bags. The
second
process of concrete production is a more simple process that needs fewer steps. Adding the concrete in
an
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15% to water with a percentage of 10%. Add to them 25% of sand, which represents the highest percentage,
Lastly
comes the gravel which is small stones, with the highest percentage which is 50%. All of those contents are mixed together in a concrete mixer that rotates continuously, producing the final required product which is concrete.
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