You read an article in a magazine recently which might be useful for you and your friend's job. Write a letter to your friend and say -Describe an article and its content, explain why it is good for you, why would it be helpful for your friend?
Dear Rohan,
I hope
this
letter finds you in the best of your spirits. I am writing to you regarding an article recently read by
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me
in a journal , which talks about how information and technology professionals can move abroad and Correct pronoun usage
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the possible ways to update their education by joining a few bridging courses over there.
It was found interesting by me because I always wanted to move out , in order to get better future opportunities that would help me to explore new horizons. Besides
this
, moving out of India would help me to lead a better life financially as well as
socially. As you have just finished your degree and started a job with an IT firm, it is high time that you should start thinking in this
direction because I know you also
want to move abroad, however
, for this
to happen you need to have two years of work experience and a letter of recommendation from your employer, therefore
, you need to work hard in your job to get good remarks from your supervisor that would facilitate your immigration process later on. I hope that you would
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this
information useful and I look forward to hearing from you as well that
how you feel about it.
Yours lovingly,Correct word choice
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task response
Provide more specific details about the article, its content, and how it relates to your job and your friend's job.
coherence cohesion
Organize the ideas in a more coherent manner, and use transition words to improve the flow and connection between sentences and paragraphs.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.
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