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Individuals and countries cannot help everyone who needs help in the world, so they should only be concerned about their own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays there are many suffering kids and adults around the globe. Some
people
 assert that
this
 problem should not be concerning to individuals and countries, because it is not their
people
.
In contrast
, many other argue that
this
 worldwide problem should be concerning to everyone, even if it is not your country's citizens. Personally, I am in
favor
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 of the latter view. To start with, as we all know the
war
 between Russia and Ukraine. The
war
 started almost one year ago.
This
war
 happens in Ukraine, which means that many
people
 are suffering. In order to help them, countries around the world decided to pitch in. They started to offer shelter, food, medicine, and other necessities.
War
 survivors are still grateful for the opportunity to start their lives from scratch, and I think
that is
 a great example. It is obvious that there are many
people
 around the world who can not get help from their communities or even their country.
For example
, there are many starving tribes in Africa that can not get help. So
people
 globally donate money to help them feel safe and happy.
On the other hand
, communities and countries should make their
people
 a priority, because all around us there are many families and
people
 who do not have
a warm homes
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a warm home
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 or even food. So before helping
people
who
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 we do not know, we should look after
people
 who are standing
next
 to us. Having considered both views, I think that all humankind must be concerned for each other, even if it is not a friend or person from you’re country, because we all are the same, and we all have to help each other to have a
second
 chance to be happy.
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