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We live in a world of techgnology theses days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems interms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree?

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Recently, there have been arguments that we live in a society of
technology
 which has a lot of merits for our life.
Although
, the
control
 and
security
 of information are out of the merits. I partially agree with these statements because of two reasons.
Firstly
,
technology
 makes our life easier for searching for information whatever you want, constantly
people
 can contact
with
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other
people
moreover
, it is possible to
control
 so many systems through
technology
. In the present era, we cannot live without
technology
 due to present
people
 delay many technologies every day.
In addition
, there are huge advantages to using technologies
such
 as the
technology
 of hospitality which makes us live much longer than in old times. In many situations,
technology
 is able to help our society and protects us.
Thus
,
technology
 has much influence to steady our life longer.
Secondly
, the disadvantages of using technologies which are
control
 and
security
. New things always come up with some demerits as well, generally. These disadvantages are one of our themes for political things as well. Along with developing
security
 skills, hackers' skills
also
 have improved.
Thus
, it is hard to keep safe to use
technology
. From
this
 situation, we should decide situations which
are
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 possible to use
technology
 or not. In conclusion, some
people
 believe that
technology
 is related to the world as new things though, no one says that it is safe to use because of
control
 and
security
 issues.
People
 should divide situations and consider using them.
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