You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter introduce yourself say why you are interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs

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Dear sir/ madam, I am writing a letter to inform you that I want to inquire about your facility. I heard from one of the students on the campus that there is a private sports club near the university, and it is within walking distance only. I am a new student and found out that there is no sports house built inside the university.

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, I want to become a member of your club. I am fond of strengthening my body to boost my energy. For

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reason, I want regular activities or sports that your company can give me. I am so much interested to become part of your program. In accordance with

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, I want to know how to register for the membership. In terms of payment, If you have a monthly basis or annual commitment and how much it costs?

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, I like to have an idea of the types of equipment that are readily available to use anytime in your area. Thank you and hoping for your immediate response. Yours sincerely, XXX

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

176 words

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