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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a results od eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food

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In the
last
 decades,
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food's
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food
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 industry has grown
esponentially
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exponentially
, especially when it comes to chains of fast
food
. The presence of fast
food
 restaurants all around the world increased health
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diseases
deseases
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diseases
 among individuals and
also
 the
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availability
availabilty
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availability
 of junk
food
.
As
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 my point of view, the
government
 has to take
actions
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action
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into
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this
 sector to reduce the
amount
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 of clients who are searching for a cheap meal and
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encouraging
encouring
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encourage
 people to eat
to
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at
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 a local bistrò
of
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 the city
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, they should increase the tax on meat production and give
discount
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 on meals at local restaurants.
On the other hand
,
this
 can lead
in
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 a reaction from fast
food's
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food
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 chains, and
honestly
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 I don't want to imagine what can happen.
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, after the intervention of
government
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the government
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, the fast
food
 industry can still reduce the money for
the
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production and give us worse
food
. There could be some
aspect
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 that I'm not considering right now,
such
 lawsuit. In conclusion, I rely on my
government
 and I'm convinced that they are already thinking about
this
 problem, in order to guarantee better health conditions
to
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 their citizens.
Moreover
, I think
that is
 not easy to deal with the big powerful lobby of fast
foos
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food
foods
, because they have a lot of weight on the economy,
thus
 I encourage
government
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 of each state to collaborate and find a solution together.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • fast food consumption
  • higher tax
  • discourage
  • government intervention
  • tax revenue
  • health promotion programs
  • education and awareness campaigns
  • negative effects
  • healthcare
  • fast food companies
  • healthier options
  • offset the cost
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