You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. write a letter to your friend. in your letter explain why you are selling describe the furniture suggest a date when your friend comes and see the furniture

Dear Paria, Hope everything is going

alright

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with you, I am writing to inform you that I thought of selling some household items that I suppose you may be interested in

some

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of them. As I informed you

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previously

previousely

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previously

, my husband and I decided to immigrate to

canada

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for

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study. Fortunately, the arrangements have been done and we will leave for

canada

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in a month.

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Since

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Sice

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we will stay there for almost 5 years we decided to sell our house and furniture. I

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heard

heared

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heard

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that you left your

parents’

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parent's

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house and you are in need of home appliances for your apartment, so I suggest you

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come over and find out if any of

items

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the items

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we have for sale

suits

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your needs. Most of the stuff

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in good condition.

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Speciality

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I offer you our refrigerator.

Although

we bought it about five years ago it still looks brand new and it goes for 10 years more without trouble.It is worth

to mention

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that

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fridge is more like a piece of decorative furniture with a

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design.

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Finally

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Finally

, I would be more than glad if you pay me a visit on

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evening so that we spend quality time together and decide

wether

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whether

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you need any of the objects we have for sale. Best regards, Razieh

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